In Animal Farm I think I am most like Mollie because she and I have many same characteristics. The both us like materlistic things i.e she likes ribbons and sugar and I tend to like little items aswell. When the pigs took control over the farm and forced Mollie to give up her trinkets she was melancholy as I would I have been in that situation. She also ran away when things were getting tough on her, and although its not the best way to deal with problems, i do run away aswell. She and I are both carefree and do whatever we want. This is why Mollie best represents me.
3 comments:
Sami, I really enjoyed reading your post. I liked the comparisons you made, and good job with the specific evidence! I find that your topic sentence is very good, in terms of summing up in one sentence, however your concluding statement could be a bit stronger!
Good Job! :)
Kaveen
Hi Sami!!
great post! its was short and to the point. I liked the evidence that u showed and how you compared yourself to her. Good job in finding words that represent both you and Mollie. I actually agree with you that you are most like Mollie after all the evidence that you showed and the way you described it.
Good Job :)
-Dana
Sami,
I really liked how you related and compared yourself to Mollie. The descriptive adjectives you used for the post really adds on to it, too. Melancholy was a very nice word you used to compare yourself to Mollie. Overall, your post was very nice to read. However,you could have ended your post with a stronger statement, as Kaveen said. That would have made it even better. Nice job.
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